Took me forever to get to this deviation, but I'm glad I did. The whole, taken together, captures the feel of a hot summer day from its peaks of heat to its wallows of humidity. I loved the imagery, the sounds, the sounds and the tactile feelings. So many poets forget that traditional Haiku should be nature-based. This series does not and it was a refreshing change. My favorite: after a daylong rain the street bursts with too many moons... I've splashed through moon puddles often after a summer downpour, so I could happily relate. I was mildly dissappointed you didn't try to capture the fluctuating sound of that back-and-forth fan -- but I'm being nitpicky there.